by Valentine_Goosebumps
Story looks like it has a lot of potential. Can you please see this through to the end?
Please bring us Chapter 2 as soon as you can! Five stars for a very promising start to what will, I am sure, be a major story.
This has good potential. I only rated it three stars because right now that's all it is..... potential.
will be reading to see how you craft it out. Nice piece...take care