All Comments on 'The Defiled Temple Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
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This is a great story and i really love the character of pugward cant wait to read more. I also like the way u explained how he knows are modern terms and saying. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story!

Just posting to keep you encouraged to write more of this :)

geiste4geiste4over 13 years ago

Another great story, I like the twist even better. I eagerly await more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yee-haa!

I love it! Pugward's familiarity with common Earthly things is hilariously out of place in this world.

Glad we got to the sex, too. (sorry to point it out, but so far, Aphrodisia's sex is much better.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
If Jack Nicholson was an imp...

This is an amazing story, can't wait to read the rest of the series

bowlerhatbowlerhatover 12 years ago
excellent

I love the whole "appearences can be deceptive" twist

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Really good Fresh Story

Wonderful keep it going, please. Love the humor and Pugward's character.

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 9 years ago
Great follow up

More fun! Thanks!

This is my second time around to re-read this tale. Fun!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Really hoping this doesn't end up being another one of those stories that ends poorly for the two lovebirds. I'm really liking these two and Pugward so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting and humorous

Reading chapter 1 got me here. I'm in for the duration

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