All Comments on 'The Depraved Dykes of FIT - Book 02'

Really good job with this series. I'm hooked! And I love all the characters, but I want to see more tension between Pax Terra and FIT.

I liked book one but this one was hard for me to follow. It felt like I was trying to read a Game of Thrones book. The plot jumped all over the place. For me, it took away from the story.

J

Anymore FIT content? That's your most fascinating series in my humble opinion.

Book 2 of "The Depraved Dykes of FIT" is by far the best entry so far because of it's main emphasis of straight women being converted, along with you detailing their mental thoughts as they go on a darker path.

I liked it very much,

I agree with another comment that it is a bit like reading a Game of Thrones book, but can see that this is the building of foundations of what is to come, can't wait.

My only small criticism is in partsit get a little too wordy with some overuse of adjectives.

Keep up the good work.

Brilliant piece of writing and "wickedly" erotic. Would love a side chapter on Emilys seduction of her husband's congregation and perhaps founding her own church. I think it would be fertile wicked erotic ground with the "faith in faith" reference you've already made. Naughty bible study and prayer groups, Infecting with communion wine, blasphemous baptisms, wanton weddings of FIT recruits/members and "farm accident" fuck fest funerals for their victims. You could also have some fun taking the piss out of purity drives. TV evangelism and right wing Christian dogma that no doubt FIT will corrupt and exploit to its own evil ends. I note you've not written anything for a while which is a pity as you really do have a talent.