All Comments on 'The Descend Pt. 02'

This have Descend into toilet, just please to flush now.

Considering that English is likely not your first language, you write it reasonably well. Your descriptions of the characters' feelings, and of the sex act, are very good indeed! I gave 4*s for part one, and 5*s for this one.

Shouldn’t the title be ‘Descent?’ Pretty atrocious mix up of tense in many places. Try some grammar check software or get a good editor.

5*

Sexy story so far. I hope there is more coming soon.

5* very hot and very good description of a woman's emotion. I wish my wife could also do that. Its been very long since you have posted part 2. Please continue the story. Waiting to read their emotion on the next day after the encounter.

Nice story