All Comments on 'The Descend Pt. 03'

A suggestion. STOP, just STOP. 1*

Very good! Just discovered your post and enjoyed all three episodes. Ignore the haters (easier said than done) and continue this, the more depravity the better!! Maybe Rohan could bring a friend sometime???

Please… do not continue. This is really crappy writing. Funny over the two years you have been writing your language skills just have not improved.

I hope it will take 100 years for the next part!

English is not author’s first language. This is very distracting.

Awful!

Just horrible. To get a score under 2 it has to be really badly done.

Hopefully she has contracted HIV and dies quickly, at least that's the end of the story!

A point of no return is reached....yup your retread writing career.

Keep writing, your flow is getting better. Looking forward to the next part.

bullshit made up names ,me read no more shit head .

Hot! Hot! Hot! Rohan is more confident & taking control, which makes it all very exciting. That dominating approach is likely to continue over to both Sahib & wife. Good build up of characters & storyline. Well done

Please continue the next part. Want to see Archana descend further and get addicted to Rohan's cock. For the next part, let her make plans to seduce and fuck Rohan without informing her hubby. Let Mohit install a Cam in their house and see her wife in full glory with the driver.

Your stories are helping me in convincing my wife to have an extramarital affair.

Excellent series. Archana is a perfect loving Indian wife. She will enjoy it more from next encounter onwards

Enjoyed our chats very much Krish. Do come back to the chat site sometime. Kisses, Justine

Excellent tale of an Indian wife. Up next, Archana and Rohan must have a full romantic session with blow jobs and orals. An Indian wife is not fully spoiled until she gives a blow job to her lover willingly . Rohan must remain ignorant of the fact that Mohit is a willing cuckold but Mohit has to fall deeper into cuckoldary. This story has a potential for threesome as well but without involving Mohit.