All Comments on 'The Devastating Erection Pt. 01'

Nice start! Continue please...

Too short.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

This is great, as far as it goes. It has the potential to be fun. However, IMO, it should not have been posted until there was more to this story. That said, you're getting five stars from me so it's all good, so long as you write the rest of your tale.

MC needs a dietician, a personal trainer, and a psychiatrist, not necessarily in that order!

The cock never lies, can't wait to see what happens next

Leave it there

What a waste of time.

I think this a small single scene in what could be a wonderful story, in other words a good start. I look forward to more of this, but I would suggest weaving several of these scenes into a longer overall work, taking the reader from here to there, wherever "there" ends up being.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

It’s so strange. This character gets a hard on when he thinks about another guy fucking his wife. Matthew and 26thNC both get hard thinking about another guy fucking them! What a coincidence!

I agree with those who say that this was too short, not even a full page, for a chapter #1. Mostly I'm saying that because it was just starting to get good, but barely a teaser. I've bookmarked you, bignbuff87, and hope you won't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

Too short!

MOOOORE PLEEEASE !

Can't wait for part 2! Don't leave us waiting for too long.

Oh, and ignore the haters! They knew what they were getting themselves into when they read "cuckold" in the description. Yet, they read it anyway.

This could only mean one thing...

They are insecure about their own sexuality, so they're merely projecting onto others. In other words, they are the very cucks they claim to despise.

I've turned in Part 2 and it will be out soon, I'm sure. I can't claim there won't be some grammatical errors. And don't worry, I love haters! Bring it. These guys are the cuck of cucks; not even willing to accept themselves for the cucks they are, jacking off to my story and getting angry about it. They'll ready Part 2 as well.

Looks like the start of a good story. Thanks.

I finally wrote the final chapter to this. 3rd and FINAL.