All Comments on 'The Device'

Hard to read. Purple prose. I couldn’t finish.

I disagree with the purple prose comment. Rather, I feel the way you made an effort to make each encounter, each woman different added to the story. I think it was well written, very sexy, and I hope to see more.

Bhuff, I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I appreciated you doing so. Who wouldn't want such a device as well as a business partner like Anya? Couldn't help but smile thinking part of your inspiration was derived from a certain sleep apnea commercial. And that had me considering what yarn you could spin with the infamous, never say die pillow guy. Ok bad joke by me but good writing by you.. Thanks.

please continue I would like to see more please

Selling the device is a terrible idea, even if you have what you believe is a foolproof evice to prevent anyone using it on you or anyone you associate with. Pre-programed assassins dedicated to getting close to you would be just the start.