All Comments on 'The Devil's Cuckoos Ch. 10'

8 months, i thought that you died from Covid man

Re Anonymous - Nope I was driving an ambulance having come out of retirement. It didn't come me a lot of free time. Lots of health care staff died.

I really enjoyed this series, well done. It slowed a bit in the middle but may be to build the plot. I like that some of the other characters are being developed. But a bit more about them would help explain where the plot is travelling. There are some typos you might want to pick up. The most common is She for Shee. I guess that's the spell checker. And keep driving the ambulance. Big thumbs up to that.

I hope to get your attention back to this story.

Maybe Erica has been taught how Mike can start getting energy from normal girls, but it means she has to share him.

This story caused me genuine grief for Mike. Please continue the story.