All Comments on 'The Devil's Due Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Even considering this whore as part of his future sickens me. How do you stay in close proximity to the woman the author has written? Couldn't be done. Wouldn't be done. I accept the dark creatures aspect of this story as being more probable than keeping her around.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nobody would give that lie filled cheating whore another chance. She didn’t even mourn for you but she sure as hell mourned for her loss of income from his death. I would have gotten rid of her and if you couldn’t kill her and you couldn’t divorce her then just have your new friends set her up to be sold or kidnapped as some other countries piece of shit prostitute. It may be disgusting and distasteful but then so is having your husbands children aborted and him killed so fuck semantics.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What is it with you anons complaining about a fantasy story? You bitch about how it would be unrealistic for

Sam to get back together with her but have no qualms about being okay with his newfound super powers. It

is make believe, fellas. Hollywood has been doing it for over 100 years.

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Just a city boy. Born and raised in South (somewhere around) Detroit. I love to write for you and to read your stories as well.

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