All Comments on 'The Diary Ch. 02'

Shame to rush through the sex scenes.. the buildup is hot, but please don't cut it off before the payoff

I love these type of stories

Yes, same plot, but never overused if done well. Can you push her harder? Yes, you can, please do, Sir.

Awesome, PLEASE, I need another chapter.

Your abilities as an author are being well demonstrated. Yes, this theme is not new, but your style has made it vibrant and exciting. You MUST continue and also expand the detail on their time together. After another chapter or two on the mother's "addiction" to his cock, the daughter could be forced to submit to prevent the exposure of her mother. Carrie could find that she has the same psychological need for submission and control as her mother. SO many possibilities......

Enjoying this story immensely. Looking forward to more!