All Comments on 'The Dinner Party'

I loved how Justine folded to Jasmine's orders no matter how difficult. I'm glad Juliette showed deference at the end. I wish their names were a little more different so I could follow the story easier. That's my only critique. I really liked your story. Please continue!

But the names -- Jasmine, Justine, Juliette -- are so similar it appears that even you, the author, confuse them. That, in turn, confuses your audience, something that is not good for the story's rating.

write some more please