All Comments on 'The Discovery'

by erotica_LA

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jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 1 year ago

This has some serious potential. Hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice, Needs swquel. Ideally James leaves next day taking keys and leaving her locked and keeps her that way till nuse owners retutn meanwhile getting another c belt for thereafter.

BamboozledBeaverBamboozledBeaverabout 1 year ago

I loved this. A couple small typos but overall very sexy. It was believable and had a very natural flow.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Knew, now new

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I really hope there will be a couple more chapters to this great story. James need to take her for a ride she will never get over, making her his future wife slave to be. To start her off he would lock in to the chastity belt each day and increase the lock up time by a days with each time. Example each Session adds an extra day, so by the end of the seven weeks she be lock up about 9 days at a time completely driving her crazy. James could even push her cum while locked up, by whippings, and fucking her ass..

AlinaXAlinaX9 months ago

I loved the first half of this, and really wanted her to explore leaving the keys at home and going to, e.g., the shops...

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