All Comments on 'The Discovery of Sweet Pussy'

Wow, that was pretty stunning. It’s been a while since I’ve read something so utterly monumentally DEPRESSING!

She’s chronically depressed and he’s a fucking monster, a pathetic wannabe Dom they don’t have a BDSM; D/s relationship he’s abusing her. You made that exceptionally obvious…

“In her depressed state it was like no one was home, there was no longer any light in her eyes, no fight in her spirit. Ron didn't seem to notice or care,”

FML what an evil bastard. It’s exceptionally well written, very emotionally charged. Fingers crossed that he has a gruesome death and she finds someone who will care about her and not just use her.

Tess (uk)

You have a good understanding of the psychological make up of some submissives. You clearly feel these things, to be able to write them so authentically. I have experienced this same behavior in many submissive women and I commend you for writing your truth, without putting lip stick on it, to make it more appealing to the masses. Keep up the good work.

Well, I often agree with Tess (UK) and I agree with her this time. He is taking advantage of a girl that is deeply troubled but does not care at all to actually help her. He is manipulating her to provide some control in her life but we don't know what really caused the problem in the first place. As mentioned this story is very well written that includes some aftercare to make her more submissive and dependence to Ron.

Please tell me this is all just some joke because to label this as BDSM is so wrong it’s not on this planet. Did u miss the memo SAFE SANE and CONSENSUAL this story is non she’s severely depressed an wot do u do beat an fuck her without care how she feels even forcing her to lie to her family there is so much wrong with the story he is not her Dom he’s a domestic abuser. I’ve been depressed an it’s the worse thing in the world an only love an support saved me that women would end up dead from suicide or from one of ure beatings so good luck in prison for rape an murder yes it is rape she can’t consent in her mental state.

Not only does this story relate a dysfunctional abusive relationship, but the descriptions, especially the sexual scenes, are bland and boring.

Thank you for seeing that, because it definitely starts out that way but my intent by the end (part three) was to show a better understanding of BDSM and a more healthy D/s relationship as both partners find growth and maybe even some healing. This was my first story and I too have grown as least I hope so. Read some of my recent stories and my descriptions of the characters sexual encounters and see if they are notbit more spiced. If not I would love constructive criticism on how to improve.