All Comments on 'The Doctor is In Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Getting to see Adina's world

You are a very good writer. I can now see why Adina has her guard up. I hope to hear more about Adina and Anthony really soon. This is compelling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Please Finish It.

This is an excellent beginning.

bwilkinsbwilkinsalmost 15 years ago
Great story!

I'm enjoying this one!

sexyfae57sexyfae57over 13 years ago
Very nice

So far I have really enjoyed this story. What I would like to know is; in the last chapter when the doctor kicked the door was it completly broken. Because personally I don't know if I would want to have sex; when the door on my home has been broken down.

I really really love this story though and I can't wait for an update.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Where are the other chapters, I need my fix

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