by Daddysgirlfl
I like your stories; however, much proof reading is needed. Misspelled words, missing punctuation,etc.
Fantastic descriptions of all the sexual hi-jinks going on between these four. The typos and the incorrect punctuation are a distraction, but on the whole this is a fabulous saga, which I am enjoying immensely. More please! 5 stars for your collection, Dg.