All Comments on 'The Doctor's Receptionist'

Thanks.

Well written, could be a chapter 1 maybe or something along that line.

.... for some lovely memories. My Michelle (her real name!) was taller (5'6"), but had a beautiful smile and magnificent tits (she wore a 40DD on our wedding day). Some aspects of this story reminded me of our dating life. She was my age, but sadly never made it to 60 -- she died a few years ago at 56. I'm in my 60s now, and I miss my lovely, sexy, voluptuous wife. Thanks again for writing this. Chapter 2 soon? Please?

But rushed at the end

I do hope there is more to come

But you contradicted too much.

There's got to be a part 2, or more. The title is about Michelle learning to trust again but we haven't learned anything about why she has to do so. The buildup is good and the sex was just starting to get good. Wasn't Michelle wearing panties or did I miss them? Josh pulled down her jeans and after a bit started kissing his way down to her shaved pussy. Was she commando? Some of us like to know what panties the woman is wearing, cloor, material, style (please no thongs) and if they are wet or not. It's all the little details that tend to make a good story a better story. The sudden stop is a little disappointing, but it can be overlooked if there are more chapters to follow. Thanks and looking forward to the next chapter.

I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for a well-written story.

So, let me see, he had a 4:30 appointment made but went right away when Michelle showed him where they were? I went back and checked and it was lunch time. I am a bit confused. Not a big deal but it really distracts in a story when facts do not line up.

Still liked it.