All Comments on 'The Dream Job'

by MrWidetool

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Very good start please consider a second chapter with some juicy love making and some group sex if possible.Congrats.

DrZeus702DrZeus702about 4 years ago
Has some promise

A bit short, but definitely has some potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A little short

This story would be alot better if he fucked jasmine or it was a bit longer. 3-5 stars

jonjonz68jonjonz68about 4 years ago
Good beginning

Nice details and pacing. Let us read some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Potentially good series

MrWidetoolMrWidetoolabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thank you all for your comments and encouragement. Rest assured there are more chapters coming. Jasmine isn't done with Paul yet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Mia Isabella?

I think there was a scene very similar on TS Seduction with her making a man suck her cock for a job. Very hot.

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Hot

You got me going, please write more .. I would love to see where the story leads .. the secretary must have a smile on her face !

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The Job Fair

I had been reading the same story for over a year about a woman buying a small clothing company and turning it into an all female work place. The men were given a chance to stay or be let go. The only requirement for them to stay was that they must dress as women while at work. Only one young man stayed and he was transformed into a woman at which he actually enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That would be such a dream job I could keep that job the rest of my life and I would work overtime weekends you name it

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