Oh, this is really good! Medieval romance, one of my fave settings. Love that you took a bit of time to establish Eleri's character and background. Need to learn more about Fehran.
I've been writing for as long as I can remember, apparently somewhere in a storage room in my mom's house there are a handful of duotangs full of little 5 page fictions from elementary school. I I used to write down my more specific fantasies and turn ons as I got older, even...