All Comments on 'The Dungeon Master Ch. 01'

I can see great potential with this one.

Pieces of Shit and Victims

Fabulous potential

i cannot wait to read more of this story. thank you for sharing your talents.

I think you did a wonderful job for the first chapter. But one suggestion, is to maybe have the next chapter a bit longer. Other than that, it was great :)

I cant wait till i get to read the next chapter

To _kyrie_,

This is a tale well-begun, and I anticipate even better to come.

And to the pointless prat who made the second posting to this story, I see that the screwup fairy has visited us again! Vitriol and an impoverished vocabulary won't foist poor self-esteem off on maledoms and femsubs. We're here, we're kinky, and we're not going away. The People's Republic of Egalitaria isn't for everyone, and getting one's panties in a twist about it doesn't solve anything!

Hi kyrie...just wondering if you intended to continue the story, I loved it!

This is wonderful but needs to be longer please.

You have the happy knack for creating the most interesting stories that insist on drawing the reader in and insisting that they stay. I admire that immensely, as i can not do it myself. Thank you for writing and please keep up the good work!

Feeling just a tiny bit dissapointed you didn't continue along the madoka line of titled chapters by attaching a quote from each as the description for the espisode.