All Comments on 'The Edge'

Nice, but a confusing opening...Two weeks and then a story of one week. Start with the one week and build to the two weeks story i think would have been better. Keep writing!

That was so amazing, I loved every bit of it. You really gave that real essence to it, and you could genuinely feel the pleasure she herself was feeling.. This was such a good piece. I wish you will write something more, cause this is just my favourite ive ever read, and I never comment on any of the writings. This'll be my first and its soo good ughhh😫😫😖💞💞

Make the next story about her gaining control of him