All Comments on 'The Elemental Ch. 02'

definetly one of the best stories ive read on this site and i really hope you continue on with where this story is heading i like the hole fifth element idea cant wait to find out

Great story! Lots of fun. Keep it coming!!!

your writing displays it well. Thank you and keep it up, young lady.

I liked the follow up chapter.. It was lovely and I also like the flow of the story.. I can't wait for the next one. I am also happy about the longer length. Great work..

I like the very enjoyable story. The mystry of the 5th Element and how your portray vampires. Keep it up.

There are quite a few spelling mistakes such as yarning instead of yawning and lots of homophone confusion; new for knew etc. But besides being slightly distracting, it didn't take away (much) from the great plot and interesting characters. I'll looking forward to more of this story!

More!?

I am realy liking this story. I like the intrigue. what is she? who went through her house? How long can Reese keep from ravishing her? How long can she resist her attraction to him? Why was she abandoned as a child? Absolutely can't wait to find out the answeres.

Awesome...i like it (ppt)