All Comments on 'The Eliminator: Betrayal'

Great start...hope for more than just masturbating in the ones to come, specially playing with a former girlfriend(lover?) who is helpless under him...but nice start...MORE!

This is a good story, though it could be a bit more descriptive. It'd be more engaging if we could see inside the Eliminator's admittedly fracturing mind, for instance. That and a few grammatical errors distracted me, but I still enjoyed this.

I want to obey. Completely enthralled by the story.. Please.