All Comments on 'The English Roomie Pt. 01'

loved it.....excellent....hope u continue this

It's too bad Emma/Emily (which is it? You couldn't seem to make up your mind!) didn't get a phone call from Rachel, leading to Emma finding them and helping out, so that he got stuffed from both ends. Other than that, an excellent read!

Thank you for the comments, wolf9696 and RedArrowKuczynski. :)

This story is most definetly continuing, I have basically the major plot lines until the end done (so maybe, maybe, Emma and Rachel may yet find themselves in intimate quarters. Maybe ;) ), but any feedback on the writting and the story is greatly appreciated.

As for the Emma / Emily thing, I'm not a native English speaker. I assumed that Emma was a diminutive for Emily and for what I gather it can be used in that fashion. But to avoid confusion, I'll stick with Emma from now on.

Proofread/edit and brush up on your grammar . . . found it a bit too dry and strained, but with some work it could be a great piece