All Comments on 'The Enslaving of Valerie Prince Ch. 02'

That sucks, the world ends and she get grabbed by a bunch of pathetic frat boy losers. No finesse.

No imagination. You need to really up your game. Please give us something exciting. Predictably is not erotic

Just starting out on the writing so always interested in feedback.Lots to think about. I did write a third part on my wordpress but even I hate it so its not going on here lel.

any pointers? suggestions?

It's so sexy... makes me feel so wet... i know it's more than a year since you wrote part 2... i'm just hoping for a part 3...and maybe more

Beautiful idea for the story and so well done

Thank You

Meg

Decent setting, story going well. Shame it stopped.

Can't really think of an interesting way to continue it rly :(

Here is an idea, she escapes but is recaptured. Or she gets revenge. I'm certain you can pull it off. We will read it anyways 😂