by ryantaylor
'You and I have been neighbors'
That's where I stopped, that writing style is horrendous.
...then please do not read my work. I'm fine with constructive criticism but when you are not able to articulate a point constructively and in good faith (words like horrendous), I simply ignore it.
Good theme and "message". Need more stories and essays that reinforce the point that you make. Thanks for sharing it.