All Comments on 'The Ex-Homeless Man's New Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Black master huh? Not to racist are you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, a long-convoluted story. A lot of character building and a lot of nonsensical story plot. Frank should have just put her up with a bunch of other homeless guys so she gets her fill of black cock. He could have but didn't which is a good story for them to get married (plus being pregnant did help quite a bit). Now that she is really his wife, he could pimp her out or just let her stay in the tent city for a few days to help out the other homeless guys with relief. A rather long time to write another chapter which is one of the longest periods I probably have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This comment is directed towards the first anonymous ridiculous statement. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha (wipes away a tear).

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

this story is way to long, other then that, good job

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