All Comments on 'The Ex-wife Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry it ended to abruptly and didnt really say

anything. No explanation of what, where, why, who, or how. You dont put your cock bare into a woman you know nothing about. Life is to precious to waste just getting off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Gone to hell!

Then entire "Loving Wife" genre has gone to hell in a hand basket. Not a really good new story in months, maybe a year.

It is hardly worth checking any more.

zed0zed0over 14 years ago
Great Start!

Looking forward to next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WTF?

did he know about the divorce? why didn't she tell him she was in the military? If she couldn't even muster enough sympathy regarding his deceased father, was there ever any love in the relationship? This story truly sucked ass! No answers, just questions

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
If it takes you this long...

...to get their first time out of the way no one is going to wait around for you to start writing the story you purport this to be...

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
? Find finger fuck and forget?

What?

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