All Comments on 'The Experiment Pt. 03'

No need to apologize for creating a saga, so glad you could not help but continue Sienna’s journey that is becoming his as well. Like all your pieces, richly textured, deeply emotional, wrestling with conflicts, the erotic moments/scenes so revealing. Like your last cookie, piece of birthday cake metaphor for Sienna’s state of mind/feelings. Another birthday metaphor later on — similar meaning.

And while thinking about flowers needing water: “But I also feel guilty, an undeserved gift.” The flowers or the guilt? Looking forward to next 2 pieces of your saga with some trepidation but hopeful as a near hopeless romantic. Pretty clear I appreciate your creative writing.