All Comments on 'The Factory Pt. 01'

by Pomelia101

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Brilliant!

Awesome start, this is one of those rare gems it doesn’t require any suspension of disbelief because it’s completely irrevocably implausible which gives you the freedom to take it anywhere. Wow, just imagining the concept of a residential factory full of sexual submissive employees, where do I sign up?

Looking forward to reading more!

Tess (UK)

ArediaArediaalmost 4 years ago

It's a promising premise and a good start. :) <thumbs up> Please continue! :)

Pomelia101Pomelia101almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for your lovely comments! Hope you enjoy Part 2!

subalosubaloalmost 4 years ago

An interesting start. Looking forward to the next part.

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