All Comments on 'The Fae & Phoenix: Ch. 01 Healing'

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gnome_mangnome_manover 1 year ago

First story, huh? It was a little confused, but such a short piece doesn't allow the author to really explain things that the author would want to explain. And, of course, there are many things that a good author would want to leave obscure for a while, just to keep the story moving properly.

All in all, quite good.

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