All Comments on 'The Fall of Troy Pt. 02'

Love manscents 🥰

fuck that was so hot and sweet. I hope we get more of these two

Adore the title

Thanks everyone. @dttoma927 I'm a classics nerd, more of that to come. @thealphamale how could there not be more?

This is kinky in ways that aren't part of my personal interests, but I still liked this a lot! You're an excellent writer, and I enjoyed reading about these men. I'll have to read more!

I don't share this fetish but your writing talents make this such an enjoyable read. The way you introduced the fetish in chapter 1 was excellent to help the reader understand the appeal of it for others even if they don't share it and that is part of what makes you an amazing writer.

This is so incredibly hot! The good-natured teasing between Mark and Troy is adorable, and I love the way Troy so easily encourages Mark's fetish. In Part 1, Troy got off on seeing Mark's cum on his cleats, and now he asks to come on Mark's face, so it's as if Mark is also indulging a fetish of Troy's, especially with Troy's Daddy kink. They're both leaving their essence on something (Mark on the shoes, Troy on Mark's face) to show their adoration for it. Excellent job in building up to the erotic scene here; your pacing is impeccable. Can't wait to see what Part 3 has in store for these two!

Hot chapter. Totally into this. A bot of trampling would make it even better.