All Comments on 'The Fall Pt. 03'

This is a good easy reading story line. Keep it going. 😉

Another great addition to this storyline!

What triggers the response and how to control it.

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The pussy, the vagina, the velvety walls of heaven. Vagina means, roughly, sheath. You over use the word tunnel when describing your male characters entering your female characters. It ruins what are otherwise great stories. Be more creative when you describe the act. ‘He grabbed her and spun her away from him as he bent her over the desk, exposing her glorious, heart-shaped ass. Slowly he pressed himself to the entrance to heaven. She moaned, “Do it, daddy! Make your little girl a woman!” Finally, unable to stand another moment outside her hidden warmth, he joined with his daughter, taking her most precious gift.’ You paint such wonderful pictures in our minds and then stop short when you get to the reason we all read your stories.

Love this series! So fucking hot!! On to chapter four.

I'm loving this series, so very intriguing.

What an adventure for Robert. 5/5

Very, very nice work, but try not to give multiple characters in one story the same name. Jenny from work isn't the same person as Jenny the cop.