All Comments on 'The Fallen One Ch. 03'

I agree with your Opinion in the Beginning .. If PPL don't like your Writing ..Don't Read It.. Keep up the Good Work.

I HAVE A LOUISVILL SLUGGER THAT I WOULD LOVE TO RAPE YOU WITH

To anon. who wants to fuck me with her louisville slugger, get a grip you fucking dyke and try it on yourself. Read the whole story you moron and then you'll understand. Maybe you'll decide your slugger is best served up Bitch's ass and maybe your own at the same time. Hey, sounds like a good story line, thanks. Lance

You make a great poin that there is a double standard in society, and it shows on this site as well. People who write the disturbingly mistitled "loving wives" stories do not get flamed nearly as much as people who write stories such as this which could be considered "Loving Husband" stories

A heartfelt thank you to all for your comments and e-mails. The next part will be posted soon, and I apologize for the delay in writing. I have so many things on the go at the moment and I'm sure you realize spending hours at my computer isn't one of them. As a sneak peak, I'm informing you to read my latest work coming out soon. It will explain the delay and I'm sure you'll have questions and comments filling my inbox and possibly the feedback column here. I will only say it involves me and another writer here, named LittleMissJen. After reading it, some doubts will be answered and more questions to arise. For those who enjoy a visual stimulation, I also produce my own line of videos called Dreamgirls. They are re-worked Playboy pics and videos done to a variety of music tastes. Catch them on Limewire.com ( free site for downloads) and send your comments to me via my posted address on here. I have several more new stories coming out in response to readers who have requested the next installments of them. Again, thanks to you all, keep those cards and letters coming! Lance

Absolutely loved the pussy stretching!