All Comments on 'The Fallen Queen of Eden Ch. 06'

Looking forward to her getting her powers back, and the appropriate ‘rewards’ to both men.

Really liking the pacing, and your writing is good too. Your characters seem to have more depth than most stories on this site, though I think the preacher is cliche and one dimensional so far as a villain. Looking forward to where you take this. Oh and what colour are the protagonists’ eyes? They’ve changed throughout the story

Thank you for reading! :) Oh rewards are coming. I corrected the eye color in the original document. I will be giving a bit more of the preacher's backstory in a later chapter. Thank you for letting me know. I 'm trying to catch them but sometimes they get past me.

I hope she gets at laeast a bit of her abilities back soon. The sheer helplessness is getting a bit oppressive :/

Henlo author can i use this erotica on my website?

I'm afraid its the nature of the story that things get darker before they get light. I tried to inject at least a touch of humor here and there when I could. When she does get her power back it will be good. As far as using this story. I don't know your website or who you are so I am unable to agree to anything.

I mean, correct me if I'm wrong but a lot of places in the states it's totally acceptable to shoot someone who's in the middle of kidnapping and raping someone??

Like he had a gun and opportunity..? Bruh