All Comments on 'The Family's Hot Summer Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Shame you've ended this, there's lots more scope for these characters.

CommanderBelpenCommanderBelpenalmost 2 years agoAuthor

In writing this one I was trying to re-create an erotic novel of the same name I read in the 80's/90's.

I have the major characters and plot points down, but this is about all I recall of it. I might take it further if I can find more inspiration.

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