All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 01'

I love it - I wish I could be Jamie! It would be heavenly!

Not a bad start, watch your switching between third person and first person though, I would be guessing you started writing one way and changed your mind part way through then went back and edited and missed bits. :)

Of course we know where this is going ... after all, it's Literotica, but the build-up is nicely paced and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!

Very good story I’m looking forward to reading more!!!

love the subliminal seduction.

Loved the story, actually had that happen to me when I was 18 and still in high school. Mom and dad were gone and neighbor caught me wearing a nighties with nylons and high heels

I really enjoyed the story so far .. I would love a home in the country like that and 20 minutes is nothing to get to town .. I am all over what Jamie is thinking except I am much more feminine and we'll into my transition .. I love the countryside and all those natural things mentioned.. I would dress full time and just !over it and just be a homemaker in a farm house and help out with the farm and Mark as well :) .. Please write more .. Tiffany MtF trans girl and loving it

A nice story but as a reader, switching between first and third person narrative is bothersome.

A very good story so far ... I am very much enjoying it ... I don't cross-dress, but don't mind those who do ... I did try on a woman's bathing suit once and liked it ... You describe the sensations very well ... Looking forward to Chapter 2!

Great beginnings…lets see where this gets Jamie’s femme sexy side!

very good start, but I was little disappointed by the abrupt ending... I hope there is more to cum...

Good so far but i agree thta the random switching from first person to third person or vice versa is something that should be edited out to help it 'flow'.

That farmhouse seems familiar, just out a few miles from town.. 🥰

No worries about getting too loud….😅

The slow buildup of the main characters is very well done.

I love where this story is going, finding the satin panties and bra was a great introduction into James kinky mind.

Can’t wait to see what is in store for him! 😉