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kirstymiakirstymia11 months ago

Liked it a lot, would loved to read the next chapter but in even more detail.

Thank you

DirtyAndTwistedMindDirtyAndTwistedMind11 months agoAuthor

Kirstymia, thanks a lot! I appreciate your feedback, I'm new as a writer and as you say, giving in more details is something I could practise on. I don't think I will do different chapters but I will though write similar ones though :)

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Hi and thanks for checking in here. I'm new as a writer but appreciate both reading good stories as well as recieving feedback on mine. My stories will include stuffs that are taboo and wrong and the characters might have weird values, it's important to seperate fantasy from r...