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All Comments on 'The Femdom Witch and her Concierge Ch. 01'

by VincentWriterman

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NalithNalithabout 1 year ago

Good build up, good progression. I do like the hook at the end as well, and the various twists a long the way that eventually lead to her absolute control. Let me know if you're interested in roleplay or collaborative writing and maybe we can make something together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really liked this! Please keep on writing!

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I'm a first time writer, I started writing as a way to stretch my imagination after years of being a boring grown up living an office worker life. I'm writing chapter by chapter, when I have time. My eventual aim is to eventually write a novel-legnth story that splits its ti...