All Comments on 'The Fertility Retreat Ch. 02'

Wonderful buildup, from the hesitancy and prudishness of Chapter One to some pretty over the top public sex! I also really like the way you share the experience of being a man and the weird way we grow up being kind of embarassed about our natural erections. Such a pleasure to vicariously enjoy the guys getting over themselves being exposed.

I’m loving how you’re taking things a little further each time. You’ve managed to make something fairly unbelievable seem very believable for the characters. Looking forward to the conclusion.