All Comments on 'The Fire In His Eyes Ch. 08'

Really like your work just wish the chapters were a bit longer

Hmm, not sure.

I said this has potential but now Bo's 'fire' is (literally) being 'drowned'.

Maybe there is a reason for it (naritively, and not just for kink), but if this keeps going that way without cause it will lose that story potential.

story keeps getting better

great story! love the dynamic between Carmen and Bo. Would love to see a chapter about Carmen maybe rescuing Bo after another woman steals him, or failing that could Carmen get Bo some cat ears🥺. Thanks for the fun read and happy writing! (cool pfp btw)

ch 9 cant come soonerಥ_ಥ