All Comments on 'The First Dare Pt. 02'

Honestly, I was expecting one of them to be like "How'd you get out the basement?" and then take her to his house and keep her in the basement as a sex slave.

O how I love this. So kinky and also possible.i love how you described her getting stuck. Seems so easy. Keep them coming.

You have a beautiful light touch here, but so improbable (the stories situations) as to make suspension of disbelief impossible. Sorry. Wonderful effort but the story really does not work for me - at all. In fact, I cannot even begin to get past the myriad improbabilities that you use to unfold the story.