All Comments on 'The First Date'

by Kingofred

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Worst story ever

This story was like game of thrones season 8. One scene you’re thinking there’s gonna be a war. Next scene - war is over. The guy came in one small paragraph. The girl came in the next one. And he fucked her brains out for 15 mins in the third one. Lol. I think this writer doesn’t last too long. If you want to learn about writing, read the story titled - Anatomy of an Infidelity

NaureenNaureenover 4 years ago

I m also in Delhi ... catch up on chat here and just try making me red too 😜

Want to try ???😊

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