All Comments on 'The First Day'

Pleasant loving wife story.

A good beginning!

5

Someone doesn't get the point of the Loving Wives category.

This would fit better in Romance

This was my second piece of erotic writing. "Butterfly" was third. My first piece I haven't published yet; it's a canon-questionable side story between parts of a larger non-erotic work in progress. Since some things in that one rely on context from the larger project, it will probably be a while before I publish it, if I ever do.

A very good start, I'm looking forward to the European story. I wonder if they will make a difference in their sex life

Very lovely. Should be much higher rated.