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by RonCabo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good Story, really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story. A follow up.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good premise.

Sex, when it happened, happened too quickly. Too automatically.

Could have used more, slow, preliminaries. More 'getting-to-know' each other. More involvement with her breasts. More exploration of his cock and balls.

More dialog during sex about wat was going on, how it felt, whether it was being done the way the recipient liked/wanted it.

Four stars.

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Thanks to all of you who have read and enjoyed my stories. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and the few not so good, and the high ratings. If you are new to my stories, it would probably be helpful to read them in the order they were written. The newer stories mi...