All Comments on 'The Flaming Girls Ch. 02'

I came twice while reading this...

Ruffe draws the Slasher in and as Charlie has described him, Robin Sparrow gets credit for the arrest. Ruffe, Charlie and Glenda will celebrate in a way to be described by MicheleNylons.

This chapter of the story seems to me to be a bit pushed to fill space.

I have a question for Michele.

There seem to me to be a lot of words missing in some of the sentences, Is this actually the way some of the british people speak or was this simply just missed in proofreading ?