All Comments on 'The Flattery of Batteries'

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KevinTBAWarriorKevinTBAWarrioralmost 8 years ago

It's hot and amazing :D

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago

I love the way you expressed the extreme longing... Well done! xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome story.

Great story. Loved how dynamic it was, getting into the children's toys and everything. Oh... did I mention I'm a big fan of denial? - LT

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I could feel her frustration and her anticipation.

I was so drawn in to her needed this release, I couldn't stop reading it. It was so well done when you kept having her remind herself her promise to her lover. I can't wait until part 2.

-- Coach

ReverendFrishieReverendFrishieover 17 years ago
Um... Exciting to say the least.. -=grins=-

MMMmmm I loved it, Minxie hon. You certainly excited something and I can't wait for the sequel -=wicked grin=-

-Revvy

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Excellent! Great job!

I really enjoyed this! It is well written and extremly arousing!

Great work!

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