All Comments on 'The Flin Wars Ch. 03'

good concept but the chapters are just too darn short for my taste! I gave you 3* and that's a stretch with the chapters being so short. could easily make 5* with some longer chapters

I don't see why chapter length would matter. 5 stars. But could you take a chapter or two to explain the world a bit ? Its very confusing.

Great spaceromp- looking forward to the next chapter.

But... Flin slaves on the human ships? And they just rescued a human female, with the remark that 'thats why we are fighting this war'... and then it shows that the humans are No better??

Also a little too heavy on the "shoptalk". I get the cameraderi- I was in the army - but the over-use of naval aviator terms is just distracting. Use some, but we get, that you served (thank you!); but I got a little... irritated ...that the stories flow gets interrupted constantly by trying to understand the naval slang.

But I like the bravado and looking forward to space battles and run ins with the Flins females.... just don't like the slave angle on "our" side.

So far 4 out of 5 stars, but the 5th could easely come later! Thanx for Sharing!