All Comments on 'The Flin Wars Ch. 08'

Hope to see more - the story has a great base and looking forward to where you are going to take it

Take care of you. It's because I am selfishly hoping for more chapters. And that can't happen if you aren't ok.

Thank you very much for this chapter. Hope the personal problems were successfully concluded.

I know I am only a short way in, but you really do need an editor. You have several places where you use a near- or exact-homophone, and it totally messes with the reader's head. For instance, you commonly have said "I shuttered".

People shudder, windows have shutters. Hopefully you get better as the series progresses.