All Comments on 'The Floating Threesome Pt. 06'

I like the way this author develops stories. With only 11 chapters, this will leave me hoping for a sequel

I just read all of the chapters and I am hooked!

I've been reserving judgment, other than giving 5-star ratings to the installments as I go. But I am waiting until the end before making a real assessment.

I will mention one flaw/problem because it is glaring in this episode. A writer of your caliber should have mastered the difference between the transitive verbs "to lay" and "to raise" and their corresponding intransitive verbs "to lie" and "to rise." The vast majority of Literotica authors don't have this distinction in their toolkit and it locks them into amateur status. You should aspire for better.