All Comments on 'The Fountain Ch. 05'

Ah yes the Christian world that had them persecute anyone who could believe in different things then claim it was a good thing.

Where did you go? Do you intend to finish this story? Felt like you were losing your focus with this chapter.....

This chapter made no sense to the story,, it didn’t explain anything about grandma or the tribe ,,, and worst thing is this is another unfinished story that is on here

Not my favorite chapter because I detest violence against women. However, I tend to disagree with statement that this chapter added nothing. Seems to me that the Aunt in this chapter was likely grandma and Fanny' s baby was probably a boy and the next Fountain, after Anais dies of starvation. I also would REALLY appreciate seeing this story continue. Ellie has yet to have her turn and the Fountain has yet to find "the one" of his life. So much of the story yet to be shared. Don't let the previous comments discourage you. I love this story so far!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

What was the point of this? And then you just abandon the story entirely? Unfavorited

Yes, I do appreciate background information to the story. But, you left us hanging! Not cool! For that reason, I gave 3 stars on this last chapter.